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I wish I could tell you how much I miss your voice when i don't hear it around... I miss the way you talk, the words you utter... I miss your laugh, and it makes me happy if I manage to make you laugh...I wish i could tell you that...
But I can't... I'm too scared of your possible reaction...

I wish i could tell you how much I miss your eyes, the deep blue eyes I often get lost in.
I miss your stare, the stare that brings a smile onto my face...
But I can't... I don't dare...

I wish i could tell you how much I miss your touch, which makes me blush. I'm surprised you haven't noticed I can't even look at you when you touch my hand...
But I can't... I won't let my feelings take over...

I can't tell you how many times I've daydreamt about you... I'd start smiling when any thought of you crosses my mind...I simply can't stop thinking about you... I wish i could tell you that...
I want to... but I can't... I can't afford losing you...

I can't tell you how many times I wanted to hug you... to never let you go, to keep you locked in my arms safe from all harm... To close my eyes and cherish that moment for the rest of my life...
I want to... but I can't... I really want to, but I can't...

I can't tell you how many times i wanted to kiss you... to freeze time, and feel like we're the only two people in the world... Just you and I...
I want to... but I can't... I can't let that happen...

I wish I could tell you how much I love you... It's the kind of love that words cannot describe... If I had you I'd protect you like the most important thing in this world... I really want to tell you that you mean the world to me, there's nothing more I want than to be with you...
I wish I could... but I can't... Or can I?
It's all up to you...



Written by Sabi96
Oh my god I can't tell you how teary-eyed I am right now, this is killing me on the inside. Where's olaf with his warm hugs when you need them? :)
Can someone check for grammar mistakes?
I don't know how to categorize this correctly. I don't usually go around posting stuff like this anywhere online.

Did i do a good job? A lot of feelings went into this little piece of art. It's not much but I had to let my feelings out somewhere. There's really nothing more I can say...
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RicardoCabron Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014
Wow... I'm impressed. Believe or not, I have a crush too (only I get to hug her whenever I want to and hold her hands and warm her up with my body when she's cold) but I still haven't kissed her and she obviously considers me just a good friend which, honestly, drives me nutts ;(
Dem feels :D 
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iloveportal1852 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Wow, that gave me a tingling sensation- really illustrates the mood. Who did you write this for?
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Sabi996 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
Uhh, i can't tell you :D
Actually, i wrote it for myself, i just can't tell you who i wrote this about (the YOU in it)
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iloveportal1852 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Oohhh, mysterious... I probably don't have a clue who this person is anyway. Nonetheless, I hope you'll get to be with this person again soon. :')
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hustle32 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014
I can't speak English well... but in my opinion, you're great!
If you write this in earnest, you'll get good results. :)
I hope that you get a good news :)
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Sabi996 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
I don't plan on becoming a writer, but I've really enjoyed writing this. I wrote this because i wanted to.
And thanks! :)
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aprilandie Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh this is breathtaking, I can relate to those emotions. I really enjoy the poetic way of expressing one's feelings!

Your grammar is excellent by the way,  although I'd like to recommend rewording the fifth stanza as "...to never let you go" :)
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Sabi996 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
Oh, yes, i was thinking about that, but i can change that. Thanks :)
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